Monday, June 05, 2017

Evil Captain Kirk vs Salt Vampire Star Trek Fanfiction

Here's some Star Trek FanFiction fun I wrote using Elephant Child's word prompts from last week, I hope you have good fun reading it.


 The weak yellow sunlight from Celtrus Prime glistened under Evil Captain Kirks shuttle. Crew hands punched buttons and prayed bracing for impact. "PULL UP, PULL UP" chimed the computer...until disaster struck. The shuttlecraft crashed into the murky sand dunes with all hands lost save one. Kirk gasped as explosive bolts punctured a perfect miniature oval in the hull letting in air. So much time had passed, was he dead? On the viewscreen, a terrifying Salt Vampire was approaching at FTL speed. In a sensational twist, Captain Kirk mind was tapped by the creature's powerful mind. Nancy Kramer latest tenacious brainwashing techniques resurrected Captain James Tiberius Kirk from the dead! Now Kirk was alive!!! A sudden rush of violent delirium swept over the mad Captains mind as the Salt Vampires mind-meld grew even stronger! Nancy wants to finish me off, NEVER? Let the games begin,


I'm Captain Kirk!!! I am! I'm Kirk! I'M CAPTAIN KIRK!!! 

Trembling, Kirk realizes Nancy wants a sudden showdown. The(Salt Vampire) would have to wait until nightfall.

 "I'M CAPTAIN KIRK" Fighting off the Vampires evil mind-meld, Kirk starship USS Enterprise NCC 1701, keeps his quirky faltering mind alive with burning fire, until Nancy's grand entrance.

 "I'M CAPTAIN KIRK" yells Kirk, instinctively outraged at the evil dark shadow hanging over him in the air.


SHALL WE BEGIN?   Thats all folks, sure hope you enjoyed the fun. Don't be shy to let me know how sucky my writing is because as I'm sure you've noticed, I had to borrow a few phrases from Star Trek's classic "The Man Trap" Still, my plot is original in a half trekked out kind of way, LOL.

Live Long and Prosper!

This week's prompts are:





Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Nice! Kirk always was a vampire of women so that was fitting.

Bish Denham said...

Those salt vampires were really ugly. :)

Spacer Guy said...

Ugly as hell but so hypnotic, you'd kiss one of those horrible beaks fangs and everything thinking, hey I'm on fantasy island with the most beautiful babe until its game over.

Spacer Guy said...

You know Alex it wasn't easy to write this Star Trek FanFiction using 12 words from another blog but it proved to be an interesting challenge. I wonder how many will turn up to applaud my sci-fi endeavor.

cleemckenzie said...

You did so much better than I did with those word prompts. Salt Vampires?

A Beer For The Shower said...

That's all it took to tap the good Cap'n's mind? Damn! That's a powerful creature. At least he's gonna go down with one hell of a fight.

(My money's on Kirk)

Elephant's Child said...

I am definitely here and applauding. Love your twist on the prompts.
Thank you for joining us.

Barbara In Caneyhead said...

What?! You left me hanging! No one told me this was a two episode story plot.

And who said your writing is sucky?

Visit me @ Life & Faith in Caneyhead. 😉

Birgit said...

This is really quite good and Kirk is used to being evil from when he was split in 2 to the parallel universe to the nutty former flame who switches bodies. As for the evil salt sucking vampire...reminds me of my brother's ex-wives( he's had 3 and all were horrible)

Spacer Guy said...

I hope you got your free intergalactic gargle buster from the magic rabbit but hey, here's the low down. Guys... I'm a trekker who's got a good sci-fi nose for reactive life and news out in the universe.... occasionally I make stories up like this one with Captain Kirk and the Salt Vampire. They aren't my characters so a part 2 would just be a total rip off... Thanks for the high fives. It was fun, wasn't it!

Liz A. said...

Did he win?

Spacer Guy said...

Captain James T Kirk, battle strategist and the only cadet ever to beat the Kobashi Maru Test and receive a commendation for original thinking. Mr Spock's surmised Kirk's solution was unique. So did Kirk win? Well Liz, Kirk doesn't believe in the no-win scenario, so that's YES he kicked that freaky Salt Vampire into another galaxy.

Blogoratti said...

Great stuff indeed, greetings.

H.R. Sinclair, Southpaw said...

That was delightful! :)

Crystal Collier said...

Fun stuff! LOL. Salt vampire...

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